Looking for Feedback!
Looking for Feedback!
My submission for the Vurbmoto FMF War Machines Edit Contest. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thanks
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Re: Looking for Feedback!
In the contest.....what are they looking for?
Riding? Composition? Air?
I think you could have introduced the motor sounds earlier.
Riding? Composition? Air?
I think you could have introduced the motor sounds earlier.
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Re: Looking for Feedback!
Plug in couldn't load.
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Re: Looking for Feedback!
I think it's a great looking edit, I agree with Blues that you could bring up the original audio track a little earlier.
My sole critisism is that a few of the slow motion clips could have been a couple seconds longer. I feel like as soon as I'd processed what was happening in the clip and started to enjoy the drama of the slo-mo, it was gone.
My sole critisism is that a few of the slow motion clips could have been a couple seconds longer. I feel like as soon as I'd processed what was happening in the clip and started to enjoy the drama of the slo-mo, it was gone.
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