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Looking for Feedback!

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2015 6:38 pm
by PanicRevv


My submission for the Vurbmoto FMF War Machines Edit Contest. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thanks

Re: Looking for Feedback!

Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2015 5:09 pm
by blues2cruise
In the contest.....what are they looking for?

Riding? Composition? Air?

I think you could have introduced the motor sounds earlier.

Re: Looking for Feedback!

Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2015 2:40 am
by slimcolo
Plug in couldn't load.

Re: Looking for Feedback!

Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2015 2:43 am
by JackoftheGreen
I think it's a great looking edit, I agree with Blues that you could bring up the original audio track a little earlier.

My sole critisism is that a few of the slow motion clips could have been a couple seconds longer. I feel like as soon as I'd processed what was happening in the clip and started to enjoy the drama of the slo-mo, it was gone.